The Wandering Year
Lucy Flanagan is down on her luck. An officer in the Paragon City Police Department, the promotion that should have been hers has gone to someone younger. She has never had the big break others seem to get, that is until now.
Michael Hermes Aspen is a local radio DJ who is bored with his job. What he is more interested in is the crime fighting he does as the superhero Pentangle.
A series of ritualised murders and the rumours of a new gang on the rise in Kings Row sets them both against an ancient power which could threaten the fragile stability of the city.
(Novel Cover and Layout by Lee Hutchings)
This is a story written for fun and practice. Chapters will start being released in 2010.
Novel Cover and Layout by Lee Hutchings
Glad you have now changed the few bits on Chapter 1 page 1!
Ill keep look out for any errors!
I’ve read your first two chapters. I read them when I was supposed to be doing… other things. NaNo relating things. =O I really enjoyed what you published, though- really really- and am incredibly intrigued to find out where you’re going with it all. I liked how the majority of your dialogue was really quite realistic, relaxed. You know, it didn’t sound forced. I think that the key to writing successful dialogue is just ’skill’; your dialogue is good.
I also like your action, which I know that MY novel is sorely lacking. XD
So, it’s late and I don’t really fancy rambling any more. Simply: please publish the next couple chapters? =D
x
I have found no more errors :FACT
I read all four chapters in one go and enjoyed it.
The last paragraph on page 6 is particularly well written.
Good stuff mate!
Hi Leigh.
Thought I’d visit your brilliant site. I’m amazed, I really am.
Robyn Mason (aka Julianna on Travian)